Sunday, June 28, 2020

100WC - Week #40 - Kenneth

When I was out and about in the cold abandoned forest, my friends said there was a creature named Siren Head. At first I didn’t believe it. So I invited my friends, I was giving them a speech about how monsters aren’t real but they kept saying turn around, thinking they were joking. I carried on with my speech. The following hours was just sticks crunching. Then I heard a Siren. As loud as the ones on those police cars. I turned around, and then I saw it. 



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  1. AnonymousJune 30, 2020 at 2:42 PM

    My goal for this week is: Use some complex sentences to create pace, flow and interest. focus; longer sentences

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I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .

I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .

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