Monday, June 1, 2020

100WC - #Week 36 - Kenneth

The Labyrinth


The big loud thudding footsteps urged me to run, but I knew I had to wait. I heard the gunshot. That’s when I knew I should run, I felt the creature's hot breath touching my back. I wouldn’t dare turn around. Because I knew it would cost my life. I shot down the long maze and I got caught in a dead end, I looked around looking for an escape. I found a little hole I could hide in. I heard the loud footsteps getting quieter. I channeled my energy and focused on one thing. To make it out alive.
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  1. AnonymousJune 7, 2020 at 2:56 AM

    Kia ora Kenneth.
    This reminded me of a scene in Lord of the Rings first movie when the hobbits are hiding under the roots of a tree. You used a variety of sentence structures and chose your vocabulary effectively, so you have ended up with an excellent piece.
    Well done!
    Why not come and have a look at my class blog = we could make some connections with your class. https://rakau19.edublogs.org/
    Ms M #100WC

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