Monday, June 15, 2020

100WC - Week #38 - Ella

Today was speech day at Elephant school and he was practicing his speech .When Mrs judy told everyone to deliver their speeches  and then the  Elephant delivered his speech. And Mrs Judy said that she was going to look after them overnight because tomorrow was speech day at Elephant school .Then the bell rang ring ring ring ring time for home time see you tomorrow don't forget it is speech day tomorrow sed mrs judy. Gooduftnoon Mrs Judy then everyone went home the next day. Everyone here sed Mrs Judy. Everyone said yes we are going to start now.

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