Monday, June 1, 2020

100WC - week #36 - Mia

“W-where am I?” I was lying in a bed...the last thing I remember was tripping up on the road when a car was coming...I must've gotten hit by a car! I looked around, there was lots of equipment suck to me, and it smelled yuck. I was in a hospital. Then, a nurse came bounding into my room. “Get up!” she screamed, I had no idea why I even to get up. I heard a rumbling sound from behind me. I looked behind me, there was a  boulder coming my way! That's when I knew I should run.   

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