Bang but when i looked behind me
There was nothing there so i ran inside and got some noodles and milk and then i went to my lounge and started eating my food and drinking my drink and it happened again the big bang for a second i thought it was a ghost. But no it was not a ghost i… i… i i know what this feeling is i don't know why this is happening to me i am scared and water started coming out of my eye slowly and hits my soft cold dry cheek what is happening to me and just then i heard a voice the voice sed to me that i am experiencing the feeling called sadness then the voice went away what is sadness???
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