My Friends and I were exploring this mansion. We decided we should stay in a straight line the whole way through. When we just entered the doors slammed shut. That made us freak out for a split second. We all trail behind each other until I heard a faint scream. But when I looked behind me… nothing was there. All that left was a note, “I'm watching you.” It said. I started to run back till I heard feet meeting the ground. I started to panic so in a quick move I rushed towards a room. I saw feet entering.
Thursday, August 13, 2020
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hey ken i really like your wrighting good job keep it up - Ella
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