Me and Samara were playing and jumping on the
Ice. When the ice broke
‘Ahhhhhhhh!!! Emily, help! help! help me! I don't like water please i’m scared I hate water and you know that! Please I will die out here please!!!’’
I’m laughing my head off.
‘Stop laughing and help me Emily help! The water is very cold here! And I will die from how cold it is.’
The ice broke then Samara fell in the water.
‘Ahhhhhhhhh!. Emily come here and help me!’
‘Just swim and you will be fine.’
Then I walk away because she was being ridiculous.
The end
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