Have you ever been so excited that you think you might faint?
Well that is what is happening to me right now.
Mum decided to book a holiday for the whole family. But she couldn’t decide where to go so she asked me to choose. Dad had suggested just about all the countries in the world so I was stripped for answers. Then I had the most wonderful idea, “ We should go to Antarctica.” I yelled “Imagine frozen water, and we could even visit a school down there. I heard they don’t have rubber. Mum’s considering it.
Will we be allowed to go...
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