A mortar shell went boom! Right next to our trench.I reached for my gun.
I told the lieutenant to tell my family I love them,he promised.
“ARE YOU SURE ABOUT THIS SOLDIER?
“Yea im fine” I say as I put the magazine in my gun.
“SIR YOU HAVE A M1 GARAND AND A M1911 YOU AREN'T GOING TO MAKE IT”
“I know that” “THEN WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?
“For my family,for America”
I pop my head out with the sniper and I spot some enemy soldiers. I pulled the trigger, BANG! The bullet whizzed past the moist rain
It hit somebody in the Hip
I reloaded my gun. I fired “2 down” and kept going like that “3 down” “4 down” “5 down” I came back inside to talk to lieutenant
He said he regretted smack talking me and said he would promote me to corporal. I agreed.
I was just eating my canned bacon when I decided I wanted to go outside. I grabbed my stuff and made sure there was nothing outside in this bloody wet wasteland.
I heard a gun reload. I thought it was our commander or lieutenant ,but when I looked behind me…
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