Ok I'm in this cage on a plane i think and I fought I heard people saying i'm moving to a new zoo. BOOM! AH What the- BOOM! AHH what's going on?! The captain started talking...Uh attention people I have to say that we are about to crash please put on your oxygen masks. Thank you! Oh no what's- AHHH boof! Oh now I remember what happened. Now how do I get out of here? Um uh ah! There's an island I'm saved! Ah I made it to the island! And there's bears here too. This is better than a zoo!
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