I was walking with my friend and we were talking just about school work. As we were walking we heard footsteps behind my friend and I. We carried on walking, I then heard heavy breathing..But when I looked behind me nothing was to be seen. All of a sudden I couldn't see my friend anywhere. I started to freak out. I didn't know what to do. So I started yelling his name ‘Where are you? It's not funny! Come out.’ I looked behind me and saw a man in black.
Tuesday, August 11, 2020
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great job hannah great writing
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