Sunday, August 23, 2020

100wc - week #48 - ELLA

 


As the ice starts to break I get more frightened and then I start floating away on a meadom size of ice on top of the water. I started to get sad and scared and worried. I realised i would starve because I have no fish to eat but then I realised I could just catch the fish out of the sea.  Then a shark had a fight with me and I won and that is my dream. Wow that really was your dream sed jack yes it really was my dream sed tom thanks for sharing your dream Tom.
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