Sunday, August 23, 2020

 I am still in minecraft. but i am a minecraft polar bear. i am on a piece of ice. So HELP HELP

HELP!!!!!! Me please anyone there please. I see some one hey you. Yes you please help me. so let me tell u how I became. I was in a battle but got knockout by a evil which then I woke up on this ice so that is how I became a minecraft polar bear. I am hungry please feed me. I know I eat fish but I want cookies. Please okay Go bye now!
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  1. AnonymousSeptember 10, 2020 at 2:32 PM

    Good work phoenix! I think you should check your spelling next time. But great work phoenix. By Joe

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