CIRCUS TRIP PART 2… AHHH Boof! Ow my head where am i?! Oh you made it! Said max. Glad you could make said camp teacher. Look while I was out getting water. I saw a circus in the distance where we can be safe there. Alright let's go, said bob. Ok were here at the circus let me get us some sodas since you must be thirsty. Ooo a clown let's go inside that tent! Ok be careful. Yes we wil..l? But when I looked behind me..AHHH!! OOO I just love children hehe haha! YOU WILL BE MY DINNER TONIGHT!! NOO
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