Crack! The iceberg chips ever so slightly, I move cautiously backwards to not unbalance it. Human waste has destroyed everything: my home, my friends and my family. “I may be the last polar bear on earth, but I can’t give up, not now.” The Human waste thoughts come back to my mind every time I move a single muscle, my children, my friends. They’re all… gone. I decided to jump straight into the water, to the few ice glaciers left afloat. The ice cold water sent a shiver throughout my whole body. While I was swimming around. I thought I caught a glance of one of my species.
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