Tuesday, April 14, 2020

100WC - Week #29 - Madison


There was a speeding grey car driving on the top of a cliff when they suddenly lost control
and sped off the cliff and down… and down they went.
They had crash-landed in a house that was situated at the bottom of the cliff.
How on earth were they going to get out?
“What on earth are you doing on my roof?” an elderly woman shouted at the car.
“We uh… we fell into your roof,”
“I can see that, but how?”
“I’m not quite sure,”
They called a crane driver and he came and took the broken car away.
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 14, 2020 at 3:12 PM

    Hi Madison,
    Great job on your writing this week.I love how confused the characters in the story were.
    Keep on writing,
    Bailee

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  2. AnonymousApril 14, 2020 at 3:19 PM

    Hey Madison,
    I like this story because it is very descriptive by using big words.
    Milah

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  3. AnonymousApril 15, 2020 at 8:07 PM

    good job maddy i cant wait to see you wen we go back to schoolfrom Ella

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