Tuesday, April 14, 2020

100WC - Week #29 - Mia


”Ummmm…. what’s going on?” I ask my friend Amy.
“I have absolutely no Idea” Amy said.
I stared up at the car coming through the top of Amy’s roof, there was a ladder leading up to the roof.
“ What are you going to do about this?” I ask.
“ Well Dads going to a friend, he is going to help us I hope… there he is.” My friend said pointing to a man with brown hair.
“ Hmm….” He said, “ looks like-”

He never got time to finish his sentence because at that same moment the car came flying from the roof….

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  1. UnknownApril 19, 2020 at 6:19 PM

    Thankfully the men hadn't gone up the ladder before the car continued out of the roof Mia. That would have been an even greater catastrophe!
    Your excellent use of dialogue has invited me right into your writing.
    Thanks for sharing with my New Plymouth bubble.
    Jackie (Team 100WC)

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