One day there was reunited kingdom Above the clouds one day there was a boy, his name was Jack. He had different fathers. This boy called Jack got given some beans. He was told not to get them wet. Above the clouds there was a beautiful kingdom and then underneath the ground there was a death and dying jungles full of giant big ones too. The Giant had a crown. Whoever puts on the Crown Sharpie King they will worship him to dance. Then there will be another can to always keep things going 100 years later.
Thursday, September 13, 2018
100WC - Week 1 - Brooklyn
One day there was reunited kingdom Above the clouds one day there was a boy, his name was Jack. He had different fathers. This boy called Jack got given some beans. He was told not to get them wet. Above the clouds there was a beautiful kingdom and then underneath the ground there was a death and dying jungles full of giant big ones too. The Giant had a crown. Whoever puts on the Crown Sharpie King they will worship him to dance. Then there will be another can to always keep things going 100 years later.
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Hi,Brooklyn. I like your story because there were 2 sides. Above the clouds is the bright side and below the clouds was the dark side. I was a bit confused when you said “ dying jungles” I think it would be better if you had more detail for below the clouds.
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