Thursday, September 13, 2018
100WC Week #1 - Dillan
In a time of need a Man called gi-ant came from underground to stop bumby zilla and save the world. He succeeded in his mission to stop bumby then the tiny humans made a statue of his hands coming from the ground holding a handle to a mace in a time of need. A man called gi-ant came from underground to stop bumby zilla and save the world. He succeeded in his mission to stop bumby then the tiny humans made a statue of his hands coming from the ground holding a handle to a mace. In a time of need a Man called gi-ant came from underground to stop bumby zilla and save the world he succeeded in his mission to stop bumby then the tiny humans made a statue of his hands coming from the ground holding a handle.
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