On Thursday morning I got changed into my mauve t-shirt all excited for the day ahead, we were going to climb a tricky mountain. We had to be at school at 8:00 so we could catch the bus. When the bus arrived it had a picture of an alligator on it. When we got there the teacher looked at the mountain and said I have climbed this mountain before and it is a challenge so we started to climb. The teacher was at the ground taking us the easy way up when we got half way the teacher said we have to go back now, it isn't wet and slippy. So we went back down when we got to the bottom there was a real alligator by the bus and we all scattered...
Sunday, September 16, 2018
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Hi Morgan,
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I like the way the alligator was both real and in a picture in your story- great use of foreshadowing. Well done on using all of the prompt words. Keep up the good work.
Michael (Team 100wc), Derbyshire, UK