One day there was a giant who tried destroy all the cities in the world. So then the giant came across a massive city and started to destroy the buildings. All of a sudden a mad scientist ran out of a small building with a strange looking gun, the mad scientist gathered a group of people to rap a rope around the giant and trip it up. Then the scientist zapped the giant and it sunk into the ground, then the giant turned into solid stone and the big statue became famous quickly. Everybody was happy the giant was gone.
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