Thursday, September 13, 2018

100WC - Week #1 - Blake

These are Edmund Hillary's hands. If you don't know who Edmund Hillary is, he's a famous guy who climbed up Mount Everest in 1953 with the help of a Nepalese Sherpa named Tenzing Norgay. Ed and Ten were the only ones who made it to the top. The thing in Ed´s hands are one of the ropes that they used the monument was made in honor of Edmund Hillary and Tenzing Norgay did something that everybody said the couldn't do but the defied all odds and got to the top and they are now heroes.  

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