The Giant of Hayfield.
Once upon a time in the small town of Hayfield there lived a giant named Canaan. He loved his house and his town, he was a ropeilder (rope il der, someone who builds ropes). One day a giant named Meanie came he was a bully to everyone. After a while Canaan got annoyed with meanie and they fought each other. No one was going to give up, finally using all of his strength Canaan pinned down Meanie. Meanie surrendered, Canaan had finally won the fight. Soon after the fight he died and a statue was placed in memory of him.
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