“Oh look at all the cute puppies,” I exclaimed. ”Can we please get one Mum please?”
“Fine but it is your responsibility. I will buy the food but I won’t feed it or walk it.” Mum replied.
“Ok that's fine, I promise I will look after it. But what colour should it be?” I asked.
“How about the golden retriever?” asked Mum.
“Yes perfect and I know exactly what we should call it, how about Goldie?!” I exclaimed.
“That's a perfect name,” said Mum.”OK, I’ll go get the woman at the counter while you decide which one you want.”
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