Thursday, September 13, 2018

100WC WEEK #1 The no worry to big worry. BY AIDAN


Beep Beep “Come on honey don’t get lost in traffic”. We have to get out of the cityhouse before the New York's biggest storm comes”. 
“ Coming”
“ Mum” 
“ Yes what is it”.
 Look at this hand, Oh this is just a statue about a made up story about New York's sewers overflowing and how a rope stopped it”. “No biggie”. 
“Okay”.
Later on that day after evacuation: “ Oh no guys come quick look at the telly”. Now onto breaking news as new York's biggest storm is here investigators found that there is a state with the buttons to stop this mess. And it looks like this.

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