One day there were two hands holding a piece of ripped rope. They were coming out of the ground. It looked like a zombie hands holding a knife or a piece of metal or rope. It looks weird, who would put metal hands that come out of the ground. They look like Jesus' hands or a God's hands. I just don’t know what it is and what to say, it is just so weird. I wonder what town that is, who would put hands in a town have you asked the prime minister to see if it is banned or not?
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