“Mum where is my mauve coloured shirt” I said.
“It’s in the wash, you can where it tomorrow” said Mum. “and you are walking to school.”
“Can’t you just drop me off it will be easier” I moaned.
“Suck it up” Mum said. When I was walking to school I saw an alligator, I ran for my life.
“Okay class, what we are doing today is a test, it will be tricky, but do your best” said the teacher. I climbed out the window and ran home so I wouldn't have to do the test but the teacher caught me on the way out.
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