Long ago in around the year 305 there
were enormous things, those things were giants. These giants were normally used
as guards for castles, farms with heaps of crops and other things like that. In
the year 307 there was a huge raid on one of the biggest castles in the world.
There were 3 giants released to protect the castle. They took one down nearly
instantly. Another one down within 5 seconds. The last one was standing. The
next thing he saw was a flash of light then darkness. Now to this very day the
giant is still underground.
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