Thursday, September 13, 2018

100WC - Week #1 - Marissa



"Hey Mum, what is that?" I said as I run to the hands and my Mum said it was a giant.  Back in the 1800's a giant was trying to take down the town but the townspeople turned him into stone and then everyone pushed him into the wet stone and he has stayed there for years.  People call him the great big saver.  "Why do they call him that saver Mum?"
"I don't know, ask your dad when we get home."

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1 comment:

  1. Michael (Team 100wc)September 16, 2018 at 11:57 AM

    Hi Marissa,

    Great story! I really like your origin story for the stone hands. A giant is a reallu creative idea- well done. I especially like the part at the end- I can just imagine my mum giving me an answer like that! What did the dad say? Keep up the good work.

    Michael (Team 100wc), Derbyshire, UK

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