Thursday, September 13, 2018

Ava 100WC - Week #1

I think it is a giant that came up from the underground with a rope to bash everything over and he got caught. Luckily the locals were around with a whole lot of concrete and I mean a whole lot. Now it is a masterpiece in the middle of town and now heaps of people visit this town and it is a famous town. Oh and I forgot to tell you this was years ago probably even hundreds of years ago and it still exists today.
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1 comment:

  1. rmannellSeptember 18, 2018 at 4:14 AM

    Hello Ava,

    What an interesting idea, Ava. Fairy tales have often told of giants and it seems your giant might have been one. Unlike Jack's giant who fell when Jack cut down the beanstalk, your giant came from underground but was set in cement by the townspeople. Well done.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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