Wednesday, September 26, 2018
100WC - Week #3 - Laine
One day we were going to Queenstown for a holiday it was so cold there was a ice park and ice bar in the ice bar you got to drink out of ice cups then on the last day we went up a big hill when we got to the top it was really cold and at the top but then but it seemed to be going backwards it was scary i thought we were going to die I couldn't believe it then my dad got the handbrake and stopped the car safely as you can do it it was a relief that we didn't die that would of been scary .
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I’ve never heard of Queenstown before. It sounds fun. I like all the details like the ice cups and how you felt while driving up the hill. I wonder where Queenstown is by country or content.
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