Thursday, September 13, 2018

100WC - Week #1 Issy M

Whose hands are these? A mad genius scientist.
Why are they underground? Because he lived underground when his lab blew up.
What are they holding? A stick full of explosion.

Once in 1365 there was a mad giant scientist that lived underground. One day he was sitting in his lab thinking of what he would invent next when the idea of explosives came to mind. HE then made a  stick and he filled it with a explosive named bal bal bla bal and he test it out and He exploded.

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