Monday, September 17, 2018

100WC - Week #2 - Keira

“Ahhh” screamed my Teacher  as she climbed up her desk.  “What are you doing?”I replied
“l-l-look, there is a mouse under m-my desk”
“I will get it” I replied.
It is quite tricky to get but I got it. I took it outside and and it ran away “run little mouse be free be free!” I yelled. 
Today we are going to the zoo! I am so excited to go!  First we see the Alligators!   We see the zoo keeper and his shirt is quite mauve but anyway we have to go home and have a big rest I will remember this day...

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