Once upon a time there lived a big
giant. The big giant was very naughty, he was called Aboota. All the other
giants hated him so they did everything to get rid of him but they could not
succeed. They would not give up, so they keep trying. One day a
giant came up with the idea to push him in quicksand and since it was a really
the only idea they had they gave it a try and they did it but some of Abootas
friends throw him a rope but they were to late because he was already dead.
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