Tuesday, February 4, 2020

100WC - Week #19 - Kate

It started at home when Ryan went through a growth spread.  He was eating all the food until where was nothing! So Mum yelled at me “don’t come back until you have food”! Well I guess I have to find food?
As I crept down the street’s  all the signs that I read was sorry closed. But although it was Saturday nothing was open? Dairy, supermarket were all closed. Minutes past that became hours waiting at the front door of the dairy.  There's just one problem I can’t go home until I have food. So on sunday of all days it opened!

1 comment:

  1. Kate,
    Good job! I could truly feel his sadness when there were no shop opening on Saturday, and worried that if tomorrow would be better? Keep on writing!

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