Tuesday, February 4, 2020
100WC-week # 19 Taisha
It was Saturday and the sun was shining . I was wondering what to do. So I asked one of my friends to come over. What should we do? I asked my friend, let's go downtown to the warehouse . So we started to walk . When we got to the warehouse it was shut so we went to another shop and saw that it was closed .We looked around and everything was closed . Although it was Saturday nothing was open said my friend. Maybe it's a public holiday .Let's go home so we walked home, then asked mum if it's a public holiday.
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Hi Taisha,I love how the sun was shining. what did you want to buy at the warehouse? why did you go with your friend? your writing is very unique. and I love how it was a public holiday-Xaveika
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