Monday, February 24, 2020

100WC - Week #22 - Madison


I was in the woods when I saw a wooden path and it looked like someone had made it. I knew it was a bad idea but I decided to follow the path anyway. When I got to the end I saw a… well it looked like a doorbell so I pushed it… and nothing happened. I thought it must be broken so walked back down the wooden path when I heard someone   ( or something ) say “Come back here,”
I was terrified so I sprinted back home and told Dad. The next day we went back and it was gone.


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  1. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2020 at 12:55 PM

    The forest theme was a good idea. I wonder who made the wooden path. Where could it have gone? Into the foggy forest?

    -From Kenneth.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2020 at 12:21 PM

    I wonder wate sead come back i cant wate from phoenix

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  3. AnonymousMarch 5, 2020 at 10:49 AM

    I liked your story this week. I wonder who the person was?

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