Monday, February 24, 2020

100WC - Week #22 - Mia

Knock knock knock, I knock on the door, but no one answers. “Go away! And leave me alone!!” A voice yells from behind the door. “Well i need to come in , because i need to write a story about someone, its my homework!!!” I yell back. “Just tell me your name and I will go!!” I yell.
“Fine my name is Olivia Davidson!!” she yells. I think for a moment, am I safe?? I don't know… “Wait a minute… your my best friend!!” I yell as she opens the door. “ Happy Halloween!!” she says. “Do you like it?” Olivia  asks.

4 comments:

  1. I like the Halloween theme you're going for. It gives a nice texture of the story. I bet you did good on the homework assignment.

    -From Kenneth.

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  2. To Mia,
    I like your story and how you used a Halloween theme.
    The name Olivia Davidson reminds me of someone.
    From Madi

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    1. Hi Madi,
      Hmm.. how could olivia davidson be off... I know! SW

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  3. I liked your story. I liked that you made it Halloween to switch it up.

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