Monday, February 24, 2020

100WC - Week #22 - Samara

It was Halloween and my friends and I were staying at a  spooky hotel.  We were going to prank everyone that was staying there but on one was here. We started  hearing strange noises coming from this one room, it was all closed off.
But that didn’t stop us from going in, as soon as we walked in the door shut behind us. There was someone sitting on a chair singing a lullaby “ twinkle twinkle little star how I wonder what you are?” They got up off their chair and started coming towards us. We screamed and tried to run away but it was hopeless.

The door swung open …….  

By -
Labels:

1 comment:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2020 at 12:19 PM

    Hi Samara,
    I like how you ended your story with a cliffhanger.
    I liked the Halloween theme.
    Keep up the good work!
    From Madison

    ReplyDelete

I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .

I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)
  • 100WC - Week #26 - Kate
    I was in Sydney on my yearly visit.  When the sun went down. I was trying to feel my way back to my apartment.  When something pulled me bac...
  • 100WC - Week #19 - William
    Me, my brother and my parents were driving back into our hometown ‘Morrinsville’ from coming back from the airport after having a holiday in...
  • 100WC Week #3 - Lachlan P
    Once  I was riding my yellow bicycle and popping wheelies then I fell off then desperately I got back on my bike and greedily go to the dair...