Thursday, February 27, 2020
100WC #22 - Kate
The storms were rolling in. I was walking past a house, when lighting struck that house. I started to run home, when Sammy came running across the road. Hay Kate did you see that house we should go in. “Really”, “Yes", ''fine ". But first I gotta go and get my raincoat. As I go to get my raincoat, mum says “ I've got to walk the dog if you want to play with Sammy”. Fine mum. When we got back a went straight to that house. We slowly approach the door. We opened it. It was dark. No one was there, the door shut!
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Hi Katie I really liked your story. Maybe next time you can watch for capitals. What hapens next
ReplyDeleteHi Kate awesome story love the passion in it. Maybe next time use your capitals amazing cliff hanger.
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