Tuesday, February 11, 2020
100WC - Week #20 - Kenneth
While going on a trip in the Safari, I encountered a huge type of Bird. Possibly an eagle. But as it flew towards us I couldn’t see what it was. All I saw was a long sharp talon. When I woke up, I was horrified at the mess it had made. Clothes everywhere, dirty and ripped. People unconscious, at least I hoped. All the animals were gone. I wondered what this creature was, and where It’s hiding. I tried to remember what I saw, but all that was stuck in my mind. Was It’s terrible screech, and It’s long sharp talons.
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Hi Kenneth
ReplyDeletewell done i liked how you where on a safari!
From Harry