Tuesday, February 4, 2020
100WC-week#19-Joe
It was Saturday morning and I was minding my own business walking the street. But then I saw lots of places not open. I was wondering what was going on because I needed some tools at mitre 10. But it was closed too. So I had to go home and do something else instead. I just had a problem that everything was closed. I was so confused about it. This was a big problem. I just don’t understand! Why are the shops closed? This is weird well… I need to do something else although I should just go back.hmm no I will relax.
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hi Joe i really enjoyed reading your writing. keep it up from phoenix. don't give up on writing
ReplyDeleteHi Joe
ReplyDeletei really liked your writing keep on trying!
Hi Joe
ReplyDeleteI love how you used Mitre 10
And what did you need the tools for?
From: Jacob