Tuesday, February 25, 2020

Taisha - 100WC - Week #22


It's my birthday. I saw a note on my bed, that's weird. All my letters normally go to Mum. Maybe it's a birthday card. I opened the note it said "Dear my friend, your Mum is gone, if you follow the rules to this letter you will find her. Go in the car and follow this destination, then you will come to a door.  open that  door…"
I did what the letter said. When I got to the destination there was a strange door, I opened it.
"MUM you're here."
"SURPRISE" my friends said as they jumped out to surprise me.


2 comments:

  1. Hi Taisha,
    I think your story is amazing.
    I really liked the end when your friends surprised you.
    Keep up the good work!
    From Madi

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  2. Amazing story but maybe next time double check your spelling otherwise I like how you made sort of a twist at the ending.

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