Thursday, February 13, 2020
William-100WC-Week #20
It was September 11 2001 and me and my family were visiting the twin towers for my birthday. “I'm hungry” I told mum. OK you can go get some food she answered. “Can I come '' Jack yelled. “Yes”, “but hang on i'll just get you some money”, mum handed me a 10 dollar note “how come he gets to hold it “ Jack complained.because he wont drop it . as we headed up the escalator I looked out the window I saw something weird looking in the sky as it headed toward us. I couldn't see what it was. Oh no!!.......
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Hi William
ReplyDeleteI like this story.
It was funny when jack could not hold it because he was not responsible.I like the cliffhanger.
From Milah
Hi William
ReplyDeleteI like this story.
It was funny when jack could not hold it because he was not responsible.I like the cliffhanger.
From Milah