She was desperate, for food for water for shelter….. The list was endless, but the woman had
stolen many things to keep her alive this was one of her stories.
A little boy was once riding a bright yellow bicycle but Pearl ( the womanś name well that was what she called herself) was to quick for the little boy and circled him, then as quick as a flash she grabbed the bicycle and ran away. Pearl had been warned by the citys council to not steal a thing, so as soon as Pearl stole that bicycle everyone in the town had been frightened of what she would do next. Though Pearl greedily stole stuff even after being warned, and even though she was homeless she was still the worst criminal in town.
stolen many things to keep her alive this was one of her stories.
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