Sunday, September 22, 2019

100WC - Week # 3 - Natasha Dalton

R is for Red.
A is for Desperate Anteater.
I is for an insect is Greedily eating all of my food.
N is for Nests filled with eggs.
B is for Bicycle.
O is for yellow Octopus.
W is for I Warned you.
This is my Random acrostic poem and yes it is a really Random I Just wanted to put it like this because it looks cool doesn’t it but kind of hate it because of how random it is but hopefully you like it
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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2019 at 8:51 AM

    Hi Natasha,
    I actually really liked the way you wrote your poem, i haven't seen anyone who tried to write in a poem form yet.
    also it does look cool, is there any other reasons why you wrote it like this? I would like to know!
    Maybe you can check out my story on
    https://kidblog.org/class/7th-grade-english-19-20/posts/dizvrm2kypqr9tdd69cgavv4u

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    1. AnonymousNovember 3, 2019 at 5:10 PM

      I will have a look at your writing,
      and the answer to your Question is that I had no Idea of what to write about and this was the first thing that popped into my head.
      thanks for the comment

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