Wednesday, September 4, 2019
100WC - Sep 19 (10) - Abbie
One day a young talented girl was sailed across the sea without knowing and she came upon a family of seahorses eating some kelp. Then she went on and saw some Elephant bones ‘’eww they stink’’ she said to herself. And then the water went purple because a baby Avocado had peed. And it floated past drinking a coconut in a little pool toy and she wondered how the baby Avocado had got it got the coconut. She thought that she was going crazy but she wasn't or at least she didn't no. then her friend appeared out of nowhere with Elephant bones and seahorses bones, she was speechless and pushed off the boat and she was never to be seen again.
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