(Warning Warning this is not a
true story!)
Have you heard the legend about the two men statues if not I’m
gonna tell you it.
One day two old men were talking about how their life was
going, and how cool they look in their suits. Then somewhere out of the blue
came a concrete truck and filled them with concrete!
“I think we hit em!” yelled the
man in the concrete truck
“Oh yeah we definitely hit
em”called the man on the ground.”Boss is gonna be so proud.”
“You donut I didn't want them
concreted AHHH!”
And that was the end - short
story aye!
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