Falling.
Falling such a building falling from a building so high it takes
a minimum of 5 minutes to fall to your doom. Minutes 1, I can barely see the
floor yet, I’m not screaming but I do know I was pushed, no one can see me
falling yet. Minute 2, the ground is starting to appear and I'm getting scared.
Minute 3, the people below on the street can see me now and they have started
screaming and yelling. Minute 4, I’m so much closer to the ground now. I have
no more chances to live.
Minute 5.
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