Tuesday, September 3, 2019

100WC - Sep 19 (10) - Abby Sommerhalder The Crazy TV Programe

“I was dreaming that I saw purple elephants eating avocado last night,” I tell mum. “That's strange because look,” mum said pointing to the T.V. A purple elephant was eating avocado on fish bones. It was down by the docks wearing a yellow shirt. “Wow that's strange,” I say but then suddenly 50 seahorses jumped out of the sea and tackled the elephant to the ground. Next thing I know they pick up the elephant and take it across the sea. “You have a big imagination Abby,” Mum said. “I guess I do!” I say imagining a T Rex.

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